This is excellent! It's a really nice blend of action and emotional stuff. ("Emotional stuff" is the technical term.) I could really feel Peter's fear and anxiety, as well as his strength and intelligence.
The characters are great here. Peter's practical nature and determination are so well portrayed. And Neal's reaction, the reluctance to deal with reality, is very in character. But of course, they're both so strong and competent, even when deck is stacked against them. The scenes while they're captured are such a great look at their partnership.
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Date: 2012-09-23 03:07 pm (UTC)The characters are great here. Peter's practical nature and determination are so well portrayed. And Neal's reaction, the reluctance to deal with reality, is very in character. But of course, they're both so strong and competent, even when deck is stacked against them. The scenes while they're captured are such a great look at their partnership.
Great work, all around.