Yeah, I really enjoyed this. Of couse, I'm feeling rather cold at the moment.
You did a great job with describing the scene on the ice. I can picture a wet, blue tinged Neal with ice crystals in his hair lying partially in the freezing lake water. It was all very vivid. The comfort portion of this h/c was brilliant too.
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Date: 2012-04-30 04:16 am (UTC)You did a great job with describing the scene on the ice. I can picture a wet, blue tinged Neal with ice crystals in his hair lying partially in the freezing lake water. It was all very vivid. The comfort portion of this h/c was brilliant too.
I'm going to go take a hot shower now.