This is such a wonderful story, thank you for the great read! Should be working right now, but this was the best kind of distraction! :) You write Neal!Whump so well, they are all so much in character. Poor Neal, just wanting to rest for a moment but he can't, Peter won't let him - I especially liked that scene with Neal begging and Peter remaining relentless because Neal has to get out of there first: "No. Listen to me, Neal. You can sleep for a week once you get out of there. I'll even bring you breakfast in bed. But you have to get out."
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Date: 2012-01-15 08:36 am (UTC)