This was excellent, thank you so much for writing it for me! I apologize that it's taken me so long to respond, but life's been busy and I wanted to read this in a quiet moment. So today, on one of my days off after a long lie-in, seemed like the perfect time.
The atmosphere in this story is very tense, and you make the unnerving brightness come across very well. And sleep deprivation? Ouch. The worst I've had was close to 26 hours, after a flight from Germany to San Diego. I was so tired I was actually dizzy by the time I fell into my hotel bed. Poor Neal, I totally believe that he was hallucinating. And yay for Peter and Diana coming to the rescue!
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Date: 2011-12-29 12:08 pm (UTC)The atmosphere in this story is very tense, and you make the unnerving brightness come across very well. And sleep deprivation? Ouch. The worst I've had was close to 26 hours, after a flight from Germany to San Diego. I was so tired I was actually dizzy by the time I fell into my hotel bed. Poor Neal, I totally believe that he was hallucinating. And yay for Peter and Diana coming to the rescue!