Wonderful!! Perfect characterization, and a gripping story. I'm especially impressed with your sense of proportion. The h/c elements aren't the least bit overdone, and the tension and drama are well balanced by realism (and a deft touch of humor!). A truly engaging, satisfying story. Thanks so much for sharing!
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Date: 2010-03-15 06:21 am (UTC)