Whenever I write plot I always seem to get at least one very well-meaning comment along the lines of "I was interested in why X happened, can you explain it further?" and generally I CANNOT because while I very much need all my character-driven stuff to make sense, external stuff like setting up the h/c I care about less, and then feel guilty about it XD
(My last fic I posted, the psychic bond one, I originally had a much better explanation of what actually happened. But I think it actually made the story less good, so I chopped it out again.)
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Whenever I write plot I always seem to get at least one very well-meaning comment along the lines of "I was interested in why X happened, can you explain it further?" and generally I CANNOT because while I very much need all my character-driven stuff to make sense, external stuff like setting up the h/c I care about less, and then feel guilty about it XD
(My last fic I posted, the psychic bond one, I originally had a much better explanation of what actually happened. But I think it actually made the story less good, so I chopped it out again.)