ext_24344 ([identity profile] kristen999.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] frith_in_thorns 2010-04-04 08:14 pm (UTC)

This was very cleverly done, with the twist that wasn't :D Loved the Teyla and Rodney POV and the growing sense of did he or didn't he hurt John? Awesome tension and mystery and the idea that he stabbed someone because that was the thing any of his teammates would have done, although its never that easy is it?

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